In your character's voice say, "I want this... so that I can do this..."
For example:
"I want to buy an SUV so that my kids are safe on the road" is perfectly understandable reason but it doesn't suggest a relationship conflict.
"I want to buy an SUV so that my kids are safe on the road AND I can impress that guys wife."
That suggests a relationship conflict.
motivation, reasoning must suggest a relationship conflict. That is what a story's "aboutness" will be about.
I want to put this want over that want and to do it I want to buy, steal, take, borrow, etc. this thing.
"I want to steal this bike because it will be fun to ride." = no story
"I want to steal this bike because I hate that nigger." = story
"I want to steal this bike because my dad won't buy me one" = story
"I want to steal this bike because I like stealing." = close, but no story
"I like stealing" is generic "I like stealing from people." Getting better. "I like stealing from people who are rich in my eyes." - Even better.
"I like stealing from that guy who lives across from my uncles house because he's got nice stuff and I want nice stuff so that I can impress that girl who lives down the block." - = seed to a story
now the other half of the story arises while writing.
it's the other want that lies dormant that begins to show up.
like - I want to steal to impress that girl, but(and) I want to... you can't make the second part up before you write the story. you have to write for that second want to show up.
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